01-28-2015, 04:09 PM
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Retired Irish Tart
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Originally Posted by CarolineDavenport
Lol, I love that you're implying that there is only one grammar "mistake" in that "sentence."
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Indeed. I would rewrite the whole statement, correct the errors, break it into two separate sentences, and create a move vivid image. That's the writer in me speaking, er, typing.
However, we aren't exactly students of English syntax here. As long as it conveys the idea, good enough for the purposes of ECCIE, I suppose.
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