Can someone tell me nicely what I'm doing wrong?

[Guest031213-03]

Hi. I'm new to this site and 411 also. I've never gotten any responses from e.com so it's not new that I don't get anything from there now. Can some nice guys and ladies take a look at my website (it's a work in progress) and my showcase maybe on here and 411 and give me some advice? I don't think I'm wording it right or somthing? Maybe I don't have good pics or enough reviews. I think I have some great reviews coming though. Any advice on what I'm doing wrong with my ads? Please be nice although I need to know the problem. Thank you to those that respond.

[kidnitro]

Originally Posted by valerievoxxx

Hi. I'm new to this site and 411 also. I've never gotten any responses from e.com so it's not new that I don't get anything from there now. Can some nice guys and ladies take a look at my website (it's a work in progress) and my showcase maybe on here and 411 and give me some advice? I don't think I'm wording it right or somthing? Maybe I don't have good pics or enough reviews. I think I have some great reviews coming though. Any advice on what I'm doing wrong with my ads? Please be nice although I need to know the problem. Thank you to those that respond.

Two suggestions but neither would keep me from seeing you if you were in my area.
1. Might change your e-mail address to eliminate the "_". It gets lost when your e-mail address gets underlned. Not always but in someplaces like your showcase and website.
2. Personally I would like to see color pictures instead of black and white on your website and showcase.
Hope these help!

[Monkeypaw]

Originally Posted by valerievoxxx

Hi. I'm new to this site and 411 also. I've never gotten any responses from e.com so it's not new that I don't get anything from there now. Can some nice guys and ladies take a look at my website (it's a work in progress) and my showcase maybe on here and 411 and give me some advice? I don't think I'm wording it right or somthing? Maybe I don't have good pics or enough reviews. I think I have some great reviews coming though. Any advice on what I'm doing wrong with my ads? Please be nice although I need to know the problem. Thank you to those that respond.

You need to print out on a 8x11 sheet of paper "I've Been Monkeypawed"... then snaps some photos of you holding the sign.. You will get more responses for realz...

[geecue]

Originally Posted by valerievoxxx

Hi. I'm new to this site and 411 also. I've never gotten any responses from e.com so it's not new that I don't get anything from there now. Can some nice guys and ladies take a look at my website (it's a work in progress) and my showcase maybe on here and 411 and give me some advice? I don't think I'm wording it right or somthing? Maybe I don't have good pics or enough reviews. I think I have some great reviews coming though. Any advice on what I'm doing wrong with my ads? Please be nice although I need to know the problem. Thank you to those that respond.

I agree with the other post about color pics, another thing the pics with the camera phone, just my opionon I would get a photographer to take some better quality pics, being nice these pics look like most were taken from a camera phone. Your big color pic is hot. JMO for whatever its worth.

[charlestudor2005]

I think your rates are a little low for Memphis. That is a two-edged sword. On one hand, guys should be lining up based on the rate, but OTOH they may think that the lower rate means poorer service, so they stay away.

I don't know if you are new to the business or not, but I think like any sole proprietor, the first few years are really slow until you develop a clientele and a reputation.

There was a similar thread posted not long ago. You might look at the advice there. I think it would be helpful, and you can find it here:
http://www.eccie.net/showthread.php?t=122604.

[Tiffany Cums]

I think it might be your lack of reviews....you have two, and they are both great, but I know I had to aquire three before I started to see more interest.
Do something with your site to make it more personal, something that will give the men a taste of who you are.
I was told I should get professional photos when I was concerned to why I didn't get that much interest before, but I never did and it has really picked up for me anyways.

Hang in there honey, it can be real hard and frustrating at first, but it is well worth it!

[Ansley]

Charles gave you a very good thread to read. I would recommend going back in the history of Diamonds and Tuxedos forum. There is a lot of good information to be found.

[Sweet N Little]

i think ur pictures look good, & i agree with Charles on the rates, id bump it up

[Lea Madisson]

Good suggestions from almost everyone! LOL

Seriously, these are some good suggestions. I hope she doesn't mind me mentioning her, but PM Babee. She is local to your area and a great help! Also, ask this question in the Tennessee forum and get a feel for what those guys like to see!

Smooch!

Lea

[Lea Madisson]

Good suggestions from almost everyone! LOL

Seriously, these are some good suggestions. I hope she doesn't mind me mentioning her, but PM Babee. She is local to your area and a great help! Also, ask this question in the Tennessee forum and get a feel for what those guys like to see!

Smooch!

Lea

[naughtynatale]

I know when I tried to talk about me it was difficult without sounding conceded.

So I studied several ladies websites and got an idea of how to express myself. It also gave me ideas on what I wanted my site to look like. How I could class it up and draw attention to it. I wanted it to be different so hopefully that is what I have achieved.

Also always check your spelling. Sounds like a minor thing but it is important.

It took 2 or 3 months for me to collect all the things I wanted to say and put on there but in time you will have what you want.

[gimme_that]

All your rates vary too much in your reviewsm your extinsive menu isn't on any of your reviews either. One is a 125 perhour review that included cbj no kissing and cfs. Your rates vary to much from your site and on your p411 profile. Also the other review was a massage review with just a handjob. The rates on yyour website werre much different and limited to see on phones scrolling. But a p411 complete with everything is assessible everywhere. Even mobile phoness.

Also you claim to do incalls at an upscale location but your rate doesn't dictate that from a hobbyist standpoint that that may be fesible. The rates for me would point toward more so volume to accommodate the incall.

[Guest031213-03]

Ok. Great!! Thanks for all the advice. I have been told to bump the rate to 250 per hour. I'm a lil nervous to do that with the holidays. My reviews do say alot of different things because before I found eccie and 411 I only did massages at that rate and maybe a lil somthing extra. I am new to advertising gfe as I've always wanted to advertise massage because I felt it was more discreet. My pics were actually taken from a digital camera but I will add alot more color photos now and limit the black and whites to a few. I've thought about my email having that "_" and I think I will change that too now for sure. I don't think I'll be adding that sign though Monkeypaw. lol. I don't want to get beat up by any providers..LMAO. Thanks for all the good advice. I appreciate it alot.

[kywelg6869]

hey all i can say is omg omg wow wow wow the color pics are amazing makes you look so much more beautiful and attarctive your web site looks good wish you gave a teaser as to the premium content your rates are dead on its just its holiday time and its harder to give to yourself than others im sure itll pick back up i would love to see you if you visit nashville or bowlinggreen kn sometime be safe and have a great thanksgiving hon

[Tiffany Cums]

Originally Posted by naughtynatale

I know when I tried to talk about me it was difficult without sounding conceded.

So I studied several ladies websites and got an idea of how to express myself. It also gave me ideas on what I wanted my site to look like. How I could class it up and draw attention to it. I wanted it to be different so hopefully that is what I have achieved.

Also always check your spelling. Sounds like a minor thing but it is important.

It took 2 or 3 months for me to collect all the things I wanted to say and put on there but in time you will have what you want.

Oh honey, I just love your site! It is very well do!