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Originally Posted by Windinhishair
Would love to read what was posted but lack of any sentence structure, indents or paragraphs is more than my brain can handle.
Not being a smart ass but hard as I may try I really am unable to get through this.
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For once, I agree with "Windinhiswhatever," but I did take the time to read your posting and I really felt the sincerity and concern you were expressing. I do wish you the best in taking care of the situation you outlined in your posting and moving forward.
Just for grins, in the future, hit the <Enter> key at the end of every third sentence, and then go back once or twice to see if what have written fully makes sense and was exactly what you really intended to say.
When I do this, I often find a lot of little things that need to be fixed to help the reader better understand what I am trying to say and more importantly move the reader to accept my thesis.
Always keep the reader in mind as your target audience. Write to help them engage with your thoughts which you are presenting in your future posting.
Nice posting and good luck.
Yes, I used teach writing at a college back east before I told them all to go to Hell and I left for Texas. Davy Crockett was a big influence in my life, FWIW.
Sincerely,
BugleBoy