Oh my.
With a subject like her, you had potential to write such a good review, perhaps a legendary one, and what do we have here?
Not much.
Read and learn:
http://www.eccie.net/showthread.php?t=14698
Ideally, you should buy Premium Access and read about 15-20 reviews before you write one (that's what I did back in the Good Old Days When ASPD Walked The Earth), so you know what a really good review looks like. But I understand, the economy's in the toilet and nobody wants to shell out money for PA when we think we're gonna get it for free just for submitting a review. However, PA is granted at staff discretion, and with the quality of review you just submitted... Well, if I were staff I'd tell you not to get your hopes up.
If, after reading the above thread you get some ideas for content to add to your review in the
"The Rest of the Story" section, shoot a PM to the forum moderator and he can add them.
I look forward to reading much improved reviews from you.
Cheers,
bcg